Acknowledging I’m terrible writer, which of these two very rough drafts do you prefer directionally as my greeting to launch our partnership with Lens of Passion?

Christian

(LEFT) I like that it focuses on LoP and the alignment between LoP and SELECT, which I think makes it more tailored to LoP readers and that's important. I like that it's more focused on the good being created here, rather than the toxicity of other platforms.

(RIGHT) Too focused on the negative. Too many social media industry terminology that most people won't understand. From the start it looks like it's for intellectuals, so as someone who doesn't identify as an intellectual, I immediately think it's not speaking to me. I like the last paragraph, because it's more like the (LEFT) paragraph.

(LEFT) I like that it focuses on LoP and the alignment between LoP and SELECT, which I think makes it more tailored to LoP readers and that's important. I like that it's more focused on the good being created here, rather than the toxicity of other platforms.  (RIGHT) Too focused on the negative. Too many social media industry terminology that most people won't understand. From the start it looks like it's for intellectuals, so as someone who doesn't identify as an intellectual, I immediately think it's not speaking to me. I like the last paragraph, because it's more like the (LEFT) paragraph.

D J

A group of likeminded people in Lens of Passion are talking about this.